(Horton the Elephant, who is surely among the most lovable of all Dr seuss’s creations and) represents kindness, trustworthiness, and perspective…

(Horton the Elephant, who is surely among the most lovable of all Dr seuss’s creations and) represents kindness, trustworthiness, and perspective – all wrapped up in a comical and even absurd package.

Why is the above mentioned wrong or worse as opposed to: (Surely among the the most popular of all Dr seuss’s creations, Horton the Elephant).

Is it because “who” should only be used for people?

Thanks!

Run-on Sentences and Fragments (featuring The YUNiversity!!!)

A quick note before we begin: I’m positively elated to have teamed up with Tumblr all-star The YUNiversity for this post! Everybody knows that eye-popping visuals are a great boon to students trying to learn otherwise dry material, and nobody does them better. If you like the illustrations he provided for this post, you simply must make (more…)